Booth essay examples: what generic AI gets wrong with the Immediate Post-MBA Career Goal
Booth’s character boxes are short enough that generic AI’s tendency to be either too wordy or overly concise creates more work for you. When it’s too concise, it tends to strip away all the value. It struggles getting to the right MBA goal formula unless you give it that formula first.
It spends a tenth of the box clearing its throat
“Upon completing my MBA at Booth, I intend to pursue…” — forty characters gone before any content arrives. Models pad openings because their training data has openings. A short-answer box requires you to start at the substance, or the sentence wastes the question.
Ask your AI — “Count words in my answer before the first concrete noun. What could that space hold instead?”
It names the job and skips the why
“Return to consulting as an engagement manager” fills the box and says nothing distinguishing. Generic AI likes to work with predictable titles that are attached to an industry or role in its training. It also struggles with why that immediate goal makes sense given your long-term aspirations.
Ask your AI — “Does my answer say what this job builds or tests on the way to my longer-term goal? If not, which words would I trade for that clause?”
It hedges between two goals
“Consulting or a strategy role in tech” — offered ambiguity, the model preserves it. In 300 characters a hedge reads like a decision not yet made. Generic AI wants to provide a polished answer and does not question each of those components. There may be legitimate reasons when this could make sense but it takes expertise to question that.
Ask your AI — “Does my answer commit to one path? If it contains an or, do I clearly state how these two paths make sense?”
It backs into the future from your past
“Leveraging my six years in healthcare consulting, I will…” — generic AI establishes credibility you already established elsewhere, because if you provide it a resume or historical information, it tends to want to use it instead of building on it.
Ask your AI — “How many characters of my answer describe what I’ve already done?”